Also, the bit at the end about showing them is a bit out of left field...

The problem with this file is that it says nipples become erect via muscles. They actually become erect the way penises do- blood flow. Other than a few grammatical errors, it’s a pretty good file.

Thank you for your honest criticism. It is very helpful and i will try to improve my files according to your suggestions. I have already shared an similar file is made later. hopeful that it is better, even if it was done before your helpful suggestions. My problem is a little, that i am not motherly English spoken and by that reason there may be some mistakes in grammar and/or choosing always the right words. I have to apologize for it. and of course i am thankful, for such an truly helpful motivation. \nPlease also pm if you like and i will try to make my future files better.

This idea appeals so much to both my wife and I. XD She loves it when I play with her nipples, and I\'ve been slowly building a similar trigger for her.\n\nI only have two suggestions: First, try to work with the subject\'s own memories - things like what it feels like when their nipples are tweaked, or when a piece of cloth drags across them. Bring more of the sensations that they would experience into it, rather than just commanding them to feel it.\n\nSecond, the way the script is worded at times kind of throws me off. It might benefit from a bit of proofreading. For example, \"Playing with your nipples, you can do it yourself or get them played with, is going to bring you up to fullest arousal and horniness, very fast.\"\n\nCan become: \"When you are playing with your nipples, whether you are doing it yourself, or someone else is playing with them, is going to so quickly get you as horny and aroused as you\'ve ever been.\"\n\nJust my two cents on the topic, and keep up the good work! 🙂